Sunday, 20 December 2009
Evaluation
We let them watch it then asked them 7 questions to find out what they thought. The questions were:
*What do you think of the mise-en-scene in the frame?
*What do you think the strengths were in the documentary?
*What do you think the weaknesses were in the documentary?
*What would you improve in the documentary?
*Do you think it followed the codes and conventions of a documentary?
*Did you find the documentary informative?
*Do you think the documentary gave a fair arguement?
Here was our result...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6NecpqgawGc
Thursday, 17 December 2009
Final Week - - Lauren O'Donoghue
Thursday, 10 December 2009
Week 12 - Lauren O'Donoghue
Nearly everything is done now, all our paperwork is up to date, our posters and radio trailers are finished, all we need to do now is film our final part of our evaluation, and then its all over!
Wednesday, 9 December 2009
Friday, 4 December 2009
Voiceover Character Profile - Adele Kyriacou
We are very happy that we were able to use him, the only thing is, i have leanred that a lot of people are also thinking of using him for the same advantages we did. We do like to take a different approach to things rather than the typical components people are using with their documentary, but because he is simply so fantastic who can refuse! We will sure enough buy him a card to show our thanks once this is all over!
Thursday, 3 December 2009
Week 11 - Katie Geraghty
We're also finalising our drafts of our posters and getting up to date with our paperwork, aswell as starting our evaluations.
Wednesday, 2 December 2009
Score Notes - Adele Kyriacou
Tuesday, 1 December 2009
Final Cutaways - Lauren O'Donoghue
Cutaway of Romford shopping strip - We decided to use this as the voiceover speaks about members of the public. Romford is always busy and a variety of different people of different ages and cultures walk through the strip everyday. So by filming the strip, we are representing a mixture of different people, which is essentially what 'the public' is.
Cutaway of Tesco - In my subject research I found that youths are very discriminated in certain situations. The Tesco express outside our college is a prime example of this. The sign says 'Only two students allowed in at a time', so students are left to queue up outside, regardless of whether they are in a rush to get something to eat because they have to go back and do work or not. We thought this was very relevant, especially as adults are allowed to walk freely in and out of the shop. This therefore bases an assumption, or at least angers students as they are treating them as if they are criminals and will steal something just because they aren't classed as 'adults' yet.
Cutaway of students walking in and out of college - We used this as obviously we are talking about young people, and our college is a place that inhabits many students. It is just a general impartial cutaway that leaves the audience to make their own decisions. The shot was relevant to our documentary when talking about youths of today and how they are portrayed in society.
Cutaway of News board/Newspaper cuttings - We used these as cutaways as we thought they were very relevant - news article about youths, and also negative. Especially when it came to John Murphy speaking about whether he thinks that journalists give an objective recollection of events.
Location + Mise-en-scene Notes - Adele Kyriacou
I was quite disappointed with the mise-en-scene in Sgt Dave Norton's interview as they are very hard to get hold of, when we finally got hold of him and had a piece of his time, it was the one day we had encountered him without his uniform on, he had a fleece on. Which granted, did have the metropolitan police badge on, but it still isn't typical of a police officer. Plus, the room we did do it in didn't include any props that connote to his role, but unfortunately as mentioned, we did have some bother in obtaining an interview with him on numorous occasions so we had to just take it and get on with it. Material lacking props is better than no material! Whereas with the two teenagers we interviewed Rhys Ward and Billy Cartawick and the charity fundraiser, Natalie Lawrence, it was easier to construct the mise-en-scene in the frame. With Rhys and Billy, they are often stereotyped as troublesome teens, often because of the way they dress. We wanted to encapsulate this by their clothing. So we told them to wear what they usually wear when they encounter the problems they face on a day-to-day business, such as new-era hats and tracksuits. The location also evoked the image we wanted to create by filming on the streets. Same goes for the interview with Natalie, she is a fashion student that also attends our college, so we used a fashion room ro interview her in. Concerning everything else in the frame we weren't able to control as such, as there was nothing we really wanted to enforce as part of the theme, so we told her to just wear her normal clothes, etc.
One interview I am disappointed with is the one with youth worker Lorri Garnell, which came as quite a suprise anyway. We were going around the college with the dictaphone getting recordings for our radio trailer, and when we came across Lori and she gave such an insightful opinion on the youth of today, with also things we realised some of our speakers hadn't covered - the influences which causes teenagers to get such a negative press. So we immediately asked her if we would be interested in allowing us to interview her, she permitted and we ran to get equipment and then ran back. Because of this tight time allowance and as it was very spur-of-the-moment, we weren't any decent rooms vacant and we had to use the kitchen. We felt that what she had to say though was so good we had to interview her, but at a price it seemed!
Wednesday, 25 November 2009
Week 10 - Lauren O'Donoghue
There's no harm in having a bit of variety to choose from!
Tuesday, 24 November 2009
Editing - Adele Kyriacou
Monday, 23 November 2009
Wasted Youth Script - Lauren O'Donoghue
Wasted Youth Script
Voiceover
As a society, (cutaway of Romford shopping strip - public) we are becoming increasingly preoccupied with the negative things highlighted in the media about youth. (cutaway of ‘no hoods’) Binge drinking, drug-taking, street violence, gang culture and general lack of respect seem to be the issues most readily grabbing the headlines. (cutaway of newspaper stands)
Voiceover
62% of the public believe that the number of crimes committed by youths is on the rise. However, youth homicides
declined by 68% between 1993 and 1999 and are at their lowest rate since 1966.
(Homicide graphs)
Where have these misconceptions come from? (cutaway of youths)
Andrew
Police Officer (Havering College sign cutaway)
Natalie (montage of cutaways - different selections of teenagers)
Voiceover
Do you think the media give an objective recollection of events when informing the public of todays youth?
John Murphy (cutaway of a selection of newspaper headlines)
Rhys Ward
Natalie Lawrence (cutaways of Jack Petchy awards/logo)
Voiceover
76% of the public say they form their opinions about crime from what they see or read in the news, more than three times the number who state they get their primary information on crime from personal experience. These misconceptions indicate something is going drastically wrong. So are the news media presenting an accurate picture of youth and crime?
(graphs to back up research)
Billy Cartawick
Voiceover
Research from the charity Catch 22 (cutaway of Catch 22 logo) showed that two thirds of adults overestimated the level of youth crime, while 10% of adults believed as many as two out of every five teenagers were criminals. In reality only 5.7% of young people are involved in crime.
So who are the people to blame for this negative stereotype that the youth have been placed with?
(on screen text)
These studies highlight how the public demonise youths, regarding them as a danger to us and themselves
and believing that we need protection from them. (cutaways of teenagers, college)
Negative views are damaging. The question we must ask ourselves is if you treat people a certain way,
will they eventually behave the way we continue to expect?
(cutaway: 'two students allowed in at a time' sign)
Ultimately we risk forcing them to live up to a negative image that is actually based on the actions of a very small minority. (cutaway of students queued up outside Tesco)
Andrew Rosindale (cutaway of students coming in and out of college)
Billy Cartawick
Voiceover
If we continue with this portrayal, Will we be responsible for standing in the way of a historic opportunity for the youth of today and indeed our society as a whole?
Break title - WASTED YOUTH
End of part 1
[[UPDATE on DECEMBER 8th]]
-- As shown, the script varies and misses out Lorrie as an interviewer, as this was a last minute interview we were not expecting her in our documentary.
Additionally, as we have another interviewer, all our footage exceed the time limit so we had to cut out some of the voiceover and research.
Wednesday, 18 November 2009
Week 9 - Lauren O'Donoghue & Katie Geraghty
We planned to film him tomorrow which should be good as we finally get to have a police officers opinion on the matter.
This is needed because now we'll have even more of a variety of speakers in our documentary which are appropriate.
We'll keep you updated on how everything goes and the process of the next few days and weeks.
Enjoy!!!
Thursday, 12 November 2009
Week 8 - Lauren O'Donoghue
Time for more tiring work.
We're also trying to get ahead with some paperwork at the moment, so we've been coming up with some ideas for the questions for our post documentary audience questionnaire.
Thursday, 5 November 2009
Documentaries Researched - Katie Geraghty
The Obama Deception
http://freedocumentaries.net/media/218/The_Obama_Deception/
9/11 Truth Documentary – Grave Implications
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rMfHxoM07YM
http://www.channel4.com/programmes/confessions-of-a-traffic-warden/4od#3010299
http://www.channel4.com/programmes/kidnapped-by-the-kids/4od#3014992
http://www.channel4.com/programmes/the-boy-who-was-born-a-girl/4od
Tuesday, 3 November 2009
Week 7 - Lauren O'Donoghue
It was also beneficial to us as, as a journalist himself John told us about his experience as a journalist and also gave us a few tips on camera work. He gave some very interesting answers to the questions so we're looking forward to seeing the footage of him!
Monday, 26 October 2009
Week 6 - Adele Kyriacou
Just got John Murphy our Journalist to do now, which has all been arranged to film Tuesday. Looking forward to doing that aswell as having to do a Police Officer and a head teacher which should be good!
As a speaker, Mr Rosindell carried himself beautifully, he answered every question thoroughly and with precise facts and his own background knowledge to support his claims. We're all really pleased with the footage and i should be capturing it sometime this week to check the sound/quality etc. Right now, we're focusing on our questions for John Murphy on Tuesday. Should be so interesting to interview someone of a high position in the media industry. We're looking forward to what he has to say on the matter.
Saturday, 24 October 2009
Interviewee Profiles #1 - Lauren O'Donoghue
Andrew Rosindell
Andrew Richard Rosindell (born on 17 March 1966) is a British Conservative Politician. He is the MP for the Romford constituency in Greater London aswell as an International Director of the European Foundation, chairman of the All Party Parliamentary Flag Group, and a member of the Flag Group itself. Before entering politics on a full-time basis, Andrew was a freelance journalist and Public Relations consultant and before becoming Romford MP he was a local councillor on Havering Council. He has been quoted as the "Future mayor of London" and called a "Local Champion". 'He is Mr Romford, in tune with his voters and viewed as a local son and 'our MP'
John Murphy is a BBC Radio Current Affairs executive.
John joined the BBC World Service in 1992, where he got the chance to make all kinds of programmes in news and current affairs after a stint with Radio france International in Paris.
In the latter part of his broadcasting career, John has been a regular producer for Crossing Continents, making programmes throughout Europe, in Africa, in the USA. He has won a One World radio documentary award for a programme which examined what happened to the rape victims of the Bosnian conflict, and some of the children born of those rapes.
An insight into Johns work:
Here's an article John Murphy wrote about the case of Baby P
http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/uk/7708398.stm
Wednesday, 21 October 2009
Week 5 - Katie Geraghty
We rung Andrew Rosindell's (Romford MP) office numerous times and finally got through to his P.A and pitched an idea. She then got back to us confirming that we can interview him on Thursday at Westminster!
Filming the Boys!
Filming Natalie!
Tuesday, 20 October 2009
Storyboard - Katie Geraghty
Monday, 19 October 2009
Week 4 - Adele Kyriacou
We've been trying to organise lots of speakers as soon as possible!
We have just confirmed John Murphy, A Journalist from BBC.
We are all set for filming on the 20th October.
We've also confirmed an interview with two teenage boys on the 20th to get their view on the issue after we film John Murphy.
Saturday, 17 October 2009
First cutaway ideas - Lauren O'Donoghue
A Pan of a ‘High Crime Rate’/Neglected Borough (further research will establish which borough/s)
Cuts of different newspaper headlines regarding ‘Youth Crime’ - Zooms and Pans
Fixed shot of the back of youths in hoodies walking through a shopping centre
Medium close up of a magistrates/crown court
Medium shot of a youth offering an old man/woman a seat on public transport
Medium shot of a youth helping someone with a case/pram up a flight of stairs
News Footage ‘Another youth has been stabbed’ ‘Crime rate rises..’
‘Victim branded A* student is seen in picture holding guns’
Thursday, 15 October 2009
Subject Research Notes - Lauren O'Donoghue
62% of the public believe that the number of crimes committed by youths is on the rise. However, youth homicides declined by 68% between 1993 and 1999 and are at their lowest rate since 1966.
76% of the public say that they form their opinions about crime from what they see or read in the news, more than three times the number who state they get their primary information on crime from personal experience. http://www.buildingblocksforyouth.org/media/factsheet.html
Research from the charity Catch 22 showed that two thirds of adults overestimated the level of youth crime, while 10% of adults believed as many as two out of every five teenagers were criminals. In reality only 5.7% of young people are involved in crime.
A survey, carried out for the Philip Lawrence Awards, reported that today’s young people have an extremely positive effect on their communities, with 48% undertaking voluntary activity.
ARTICLES ABOUT YOUTHS AND THE MEDIA:
Speakers? - Adele Kyriacou
*MP
*Journalists
*Youths
*Youth worker
*The Public
*Teacher
*Parents
Tuesday, 13 October 2009
Brainstorm - Katie Geraghty
Monday, 12 October 2009
Week 3
“Are young people today portrayed as a generation to fear in contemporary society by the news in the media?”
Today’s apparent “Wasted Youth”
In this topic, we plan to explore the idea that if the news in the media continues to portray the youth of today as problematic, will they or have they already fulfilled the appointed role that is expected of them by society?
We will identify the circumstances in which this perception has been created, by reports of crime and violence amongst young people and how this influences the train of thought of the public and how it has altered their reactions to youths today.
An extract taken from an article at http://www.telegraph.com/ titled ‘Violent youth crime up a third’
A senior official at West London Youth Court, in Hammersmith, stares despondently at the growing stack of criminal files piled in front of him, each containing what he says are the stark details of a child's life going to waste. "The youth justice system simply cannot cope," he tells me. "We are being swamped. We are being asked to deal with a problem that is of society's making and all we seem to be able to do is apply a sticking plaster to it."
This implies that the situation is not being dealt with, it is just being covered up and thus getting worse.
* GANG-POLICE PROTECTION QUOTE taken from http://www.24dash.com/news/Central_Government/2007-05-23-Don-t-label-youth-groups-gangs-report
"Our own research on the experience of black young people in trouble with the law, called Just Justice(1), showed that none of the young people in the study trusted the authorities, and particularly the police, to protect them. Young people in the study overwhelmingly reported that they would rather turn to their friends and family to help them when in need, and to take justice into their own hands if crimes were committed against them." This seems to be an issue that needs to be dealt with as youth crime, especially serious cases seems to be a result of the fact that youths feel neglected by the criminal justice system and therefore feel they need to take matters into their own hands I.e. committing crimes of a vengeful nature.
In order of finding a conclusion to this popular debate, we plan to interview a series of public figures (a list is as follows) to find out their views on the topic at hand. We will ask them whether they believe news in the media is a dominant factor of portraying youths negatively and ask if they believe that youths are stereotyped in society primarily because of this. We will also interview a number of youths that feel they are affected by this misconception as they are the subject of the documentary and are therefore arguably the most important. There is no better way to find out about the youths of today, than asking them about themselves. Additionally, we will speak to other general members of the public that hold their own and find out whether they feel the media influences these ideas.
Wednesday, 7 October 2009
Week 2 - Lauren O'Donoghue
Camerawoman: Katie Geraghty
Editor: Adele Kyriacou
2. Voice-over script
3. Preparatory storybaord
4. Documentary genre notes
5. Audience testing notes
6. Subject research notes
7. Score notes
8. Location notes
9. Speakers (Interviews)
10. Questionnaire
11. Evaluation
12. Script
13. Shot list
14. Analysis of a documentary
15. Questionnaire (before documentary filmed)
16. Questionnaire (after documentary filmed)
17. Interviewee profile
18. Documentary interview framing picture
Tuesday, 29 September 2009
Monday, 21 September 2009
Welcome!!
For our A2 Media Studies we've been asked to create an impartial and creative documentary for the BBC about an issue that we feel affects the world today...
In this blog you will see a 'Step by Step' progression guide, from the planning to the making and research for our documentary..and just how much work goes into it!
Catch You Later!!
Lauren, Katie and Adele
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